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bits i circled look really messy. those need a desperate cleanup. Plus the proportions seem off, you got some strange edges going on, the bed is just a bunch of flat stuff, so throw some bevels in there. Plus the rest of the body looks really flat in spots, especially the front end. every surface needs some depth.

 

As for the paint, there's no real flow. the daimondplate just sort of stops, the AO bake on the white bits is just overbearing. Makes it look like film grain: the truck, rather than selling it as paint. Also i'm pretty sure real lights aren't just big bricks of solid colour. So model the stuff in there or something, iunno

 

Try setting the AO to multiply at about 75% to fix the grain, other than that, yeah. Needs work

To add, I believe the bed is supposed to reach over the top of the cab and the light-bar is supposed to be on top of the bed, not the truck cab. Also, adjust the hood. I can see the frame rails through it by the windshield.

 

and @ Nascar: Very interesting track, but how is the race course laid out? I have an idea of it, but I'd like to know for sure. Def. looking forward to the release so I can tear that track up!

 

And on a side note, Outrage is back in the shop once again. Now that I have RoR working on my laptop, then I figure it's high time I get that ol' devil finished up at long last. Now if I could only figure out why blender won't import...

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